...Are You Really Poem by Manonton Dalan
...Are You Really
i open my window
to let my soul
wander
in search
for you,
cold draft came
with vengeance
giving me goose bumps
but i endured
mumbling your name
i sat down
bowing my head
to more frustration
to a sight of a squirrel
digging nuts in rubble
bright idea
i called your number
listening to your fading voice
“i call you later”
very good, i can see guiter chords in this poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
i like the 'bowing your head' part it is like i am watching a scene while outside a window marundunong ka bali bali thank you for reading my poem 'hair less' haha gabay kon naramdaman ya manmaliw ya gwapo anggano magano labat
open my window to let my soul wander in search for you, .thius is how u loose your patience when you donot find your loved one..... it is beautiful poem.. to the point dear.....10 read mine... i miss.... Mary to marry..... miss i miss u
Very good! the first three verses remind me of 'The Song of Wandering Aengus'. The last: a modern version of it. Well done!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/1/2023 3:08:31 AM # 1.0.0.1115
Cute and lovely.10++