...Are You Really Poem by Manonton Dalan

...Are You Really

Rating: 2.7

i open my window
to let my soul
in search
for you,

cold draft came
with vengeance
giving me goose bumps
but i endured
mumbling your name

i sat down
bowing my head
to more frustration
to a sight of a squirrel
digging nuts in rubble

bright idea
i called your number
listening to your fading voice
“i call you later”

Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Cute and lovely.10++

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Icy Rivas 16 November 2008

very cool its seem like u lost someone

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David Gerardino 21 January 2012

very good, i can see guiter chords in this poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 October 2011

i like the 'bowing your head' part it is like i am watching a scene while outside a window marundunong ka bali bali thank you for reading my poem 'hair less' haha gabay kon naramdaman ya manmaliw ya gwapo anggano magano labat

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Raj Arumugam 02 April 2010

touching and lyrical; good poem, Manonton

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 March 2010

open my window to let my soul wander in search for you, .thius is how u loose your patience when you donot find your loved one..... it is beautiful poem.. to the point dear.....10 read mine... i miss.... Mary to marry..... miss i miss u

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Cúcídh Mac Cuagh 02 March 2010

Very good! the first three verses remind me of 'The Song of Wandering Aengus'. The last: a modern version of it. Well done!

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