Manonton Dalan

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051011d Try Harder - Poem by Manonton Dalan

small yellow flags over asphalt
giving direction for tire tracks
very strong smell of newly laid
rain would be really welcome
yes, it will be hardened quickly
run-off might be harmful to river

for every good things we get
we suffer a certain degree
maybe health or environment
how safe could be breathing
exhaust pipes or flower's pollen
you're lucky if reach retirement

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

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