Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 31,798 Points (virginia, usa)

051211h Rusted Joints - Poem by Manonton Dalan

there is knot i can't unravel
it's giving difficulty; trouble
can't be dissolve by words
senses seems to be blind
die is cast; it's corrupted
replacement good solution

buying a new one is option
waiting time is an obstacle
works half decent can't pass
it does its purpose but loud
i'm counting those thumbs
i believe favors new one


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 13, 2011


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