Manonton Dalan

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051311d Would I Be Walking - Poem by Manonton Dalan

hurrying to place garbage can
on curb for weekly pick-up, i
i notice overcast, impending
rain will soon come to reality
this road would be under water
i would be gliding or walking

drainge is for 500gpm; three
for downpour on neighborhood
every engineer on this planet
would say, it's not enough :)
even they put ten channels clog
we are back to ages, slow drip


Comments about 051311d Would I Be Walking by Manonton Dalan

  • (5/13/2011 7:52:00 AM)


    you take on a very tumultuous journey..great!
    ur poems made nice reading...excellent composition...i loved reading ur poem..plz read my poem I AM A PROLETARIAT and leave a comment plz
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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