ଖୋଜିବା ର ସେଇ କେତେ ଦିନ- 08(Khojiba Ra Sei Kete Dina/Odia Poem-08) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ଖୋଜିବା ର ସେଇ କେତେ ଦିନ- 08(Khojiba Ra Sei Kete Dina/Odia Poem-08)

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ପୂର୍ବ ଲଗ୍ନ, ଏକାନ୍ତ ବେଳା ରେ-


ଲାଳସା ର ଏରୁଣ୍ଡି ବନ୍ଧ କୁ

କେବେ ବି ଡେଇଁ ନଥିବା

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ଲୁଚି ଲୁଚି ଦେଖିବା ର

ଅନୂଢା ଯୌବନ,

ଲଜ୍ଜାରୁଣ ଶୂନ୍ୟତା ର

ସବୁ ସନ୍ଧି ସ୍ଥଳ ।।



ଫିଟିଯାଏ ସବୁତକ

ଗୋପନ ଗୁମର,

ନଦୀ ଜଳ-

ନୀଳ ଶାଢୀ ଛାଡି

ତରବରେ ପିନ୍ଧି ନିଏ ଅନ୍ତର୍ବାସ

ଗୋଳିଆ ରଙ୍ଗ ର ।।

ଖୋଜିବା ର ସେଇ କେତେ ଦିନ- 08(Khojiba Ra Sei Kete Dina/Odia Poem-08)
Monday, November 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,longing,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Quest for love or the person of your dream becomes timeless when the heart takes the place of all the senses- the eyes, the ears, the nose are no more the essential instruments of perception. Sights or sounds, fragrances or touches are no more a need to tread upon.
A lyrical presence of the beloved is often heard from beyond the mundane landscapes, the heart beats and sings a new tune, to the music of unheard songs.
A fragrance of lost dreams return to the bed of desire wet with moonshines of the past moments as a promise of a spring.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D Priyanka Singh 07 November 2017

A fragrance of lost dreams return to the bed of desire wet with moonshines of the past moments as a promise of a spring. Lovely poem shared. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ଲାଳସା ର ଏରୁଣ୍ଡି ବନ୍ଧ କୁ କେବେ ବି ଡେଇଁ ନଥିବା ରମ୍ୟ ଅଜଗର- ଦେହାତୀତ ଅରଣ୍ୟ ର ନି8ସଙ୍ଗ ଅନ୍ଧାରୁ ଅଜାଣତେ ଚାଲି ଆସେ A nicely crafted poem in our mother tongue, I agree with you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

ଫିଟିଯାଏ ସବୁତକ ଗୋପନ ଗୁମର, ନଦୀ ଜଳ- ନୀଳ ଶାଢୀ ଛାଡି ତରବରେ ପିନ୍ଧି ନିଏ ଅନ୍ତର୍ବାସ ଗୋଳିଆ ରଙ୍ଗ ର ।।... chamatkara hoichhi barnana phitijae gopana gumara premare judubudu sada tathapi ta rahiachhi lajja pindhi nie antarbasa Golia rangara Dhany kabibara taba barnadhy barnana Bismita karai sada pathaka mananku Dhanyabada na dei mu rahi paru nahin Ghena eha, bhagabana karuntu mangala.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ଲାଳସା ର ଏରୁଣ୍ଡି ବନ୍ଧ କୁ କେବେ ବି ଡେଇଁ ନଥିବା ରମ୍ୟ ଅଜଗର- ଦେହାତୀତ ଅରଣ୍ୟ ର ନି8ସଙ୍ଗ ଅନ୍ଧାରୁ ଅଜାଣତେ ଚାଲି ଆସେ A nicely crafted poem in our mother tongue, I agree with you Sir.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

Thank you my revered Sir for such beautiful remarks and these inspiring words.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 November 2017

great love, pure love

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 November 2017

ଲାଳସା ର ଏରୁଣ୍ଡି ବନ୍ଧ କୁ କେବେ ବି ଡେଇଁ ନଥିବା ରମ୍ୟ ଅଜଗର- ଦେହାତୀତ ଅରଣ୍ୟ ର ନି8ସଙ୍ଗ ଅନ୍ଧାରୁ ଅଜାଣତେ ଚାଲି ଆସେ A nicely crafted poem in our mother tongue, I agree with you dear Sir.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 November 2017

Thank you Sir my revered for your kind remarks and for breaking the month long silence on my page. Regards, Subhas.

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