088. July Thoughts 2005 Poem by Jaden Knight

088. July Thoughts 2005



Getting annoyed with the way
this existence lies
'cause it seems like there's no truth
don't try to over analyse

So sick ofhearing about these stupid battles
that people want stopped
but is it not time we all joined in
another world war won't make a difference
we'll still all be dead in the end

Are we running out of ways
to run and hide from the trash
that we call life
isn't it a shame when we won't stand up
and face it head on

If you want to have anything
you have to fight for it
even if you want to have peace
surely that's not right

Death is the disease we pretend to be
yet even we can't escape it
sure we'll avoid it for a few years
but then it catches up
and does not let go

Tuesday, March 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: warning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beach Girl 04 March 2014

Sounds like you're a bit more than 'annoyed' with the way the world is headed. I don't blame you, however I'm not sure I agree with joining in another world war since it won't make a difference and we'll all be dead in the end. But perhaps you meant this in a less literal way, I'm not very good at discerning other people thoughts at times. Still, this is a very thought provoking poem and I enjoyed it very much!

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