004. The Computer Prayer Poem by Jaden Knight

Amen! 10 for this one :)

being an agnostic and sometimes, though rarely, sacrilegious, and often trying to be funny, i give this a high mark! i sent it to MyPoemList and tried to send it to a cousin, but PH or MY COMPUTER is not cooperating with my second request; it COULDN'T be because i am a computer-dummy! hallelujah for this humor. thanks for sharing. bri :)

This poem was a lot of fun to read and I've already shared it with a couple of my friends. Definitely saving this one. :)

I can only agree with others - this is a clever, delightful poem! I don't find anything sacrilegious about it because you are clearly using the OUR FATHER as a point of reference with respect to values, and showing how the computer has sidled into our lives and usurped its position as a now NECESSARY TOOL. In Frank Herbert's DUNE from the 1960s, humanity in the distant future have banned Thinking Machines because they subvert us; instead specially trained humans called MENTATS do the higher calculations! Perhaps for the best!

This was very well written

Very amusing!

i probably should have use a semi-colon OR a period, instead of a comma, after shepherd in my last entry. :)

The Lord is my shepherd, i shall not want another. He did lead me to lie down in green pastures. And when I awoke to find a woman at my side, I was thankful for a woman there...., instead of a brother. i left a comment a long time ago. this is just a little thankyou. Thank you, Lord. bri :)

LOL, very entertaining. And 1999 explains the A: drive, I still have an external floppy drive in a dusty box somewhere. I will show your prayer to my priest, I think he would love it, maybe even use it in one of his homilies.

You are very creative, John. I am simply overwhelmed by this one. The Lord's prayer converted into a computer prayer, well done!