09 My Best Friend Poem by Athul KrishnaA

09 My Best Friend

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My best friend is a dog,
He sleeps like a log.
He has very sharp front teeth
And he likes to lie in the heat.
He barks when excited
And shy when highlighted.
I think he is a hero
My father thinks he is zero
He walks with me to the mills
His barks could be heard over the hills!
He has a waggy tail
And he has never wailed
He has good eye sight
And a very good bite
The thieves are afraid of him
He has never been dim
He was sold to me by a mason
And I woildn't give him up for any reason! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nkululeko Mdudu 24 April 2008

'And they are our spirit brothers', you have touched on a point that all mankind should nrver forget. for this I sallute you!

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Jack Tex 23 April 2008

No wonder your dog is your best friend around. The unlikeliest of friendships could form between man and animals, that's what happened time and again throughout history. Very well done, I must admit and a surprisingly mature write for you age.

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This author has the luck to have a so nice dog. It's a part of him, his natural and heroic part.

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Scott Austin 21 April 2008

This is a wonderful piece of work, there is nothing more special than a youngman and his dog. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Scott

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