After a night of incessant rain,
The dawn strolled in,
Splintering the Eastern sky
Into jagged streaks of light
Like lava flowing through
Volcanic fissures
I am looking at your beautiful Eastern dawn. You are a superb word artist. Write on, my poet friend, Warmest regards, Sandra
The image is superb (particularly 'the dawn strolled in') , but the last line is superfluous (in my humble opinion) . You write very well. love, Allie xxxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem. Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul and Akhil who are young poets. But their poems are super.