look through my eyes
deep into my soul
what you shall see
is
a
dark
empty
hole
listen closely for my voice
for words you will not hear
the only sound left
is
the
falling
of
1
last tear
search for me
i cannot hide
for you see
i
have
died
this was a great one Sandy, very tender and warm. been some time since i read anything of yours, glad your still on poemhunter,
hey, i like how you can right about your emotions like that. i am trying to get better at it.
Very sad, interesting style both in terms of the sound and the visual appeal.
I give this one a ten and can't wait to read more of what you've written. -shannon
Hi Sandy, I really liked this poem 1 Last Tear. It is sad though. I am slowly but surely transferring my poems here from Starlight. I am going to take advantage of the free e-book. I only have 48 poems so it should not take too long. I hope youare feeling better and I miss chatting with you. By the way, I always vote a 10 on your poems. James
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Absolutely beautifully written... well done!