10 Haiku Dirges Poem by Amir Foroughi

10 Haiku Dirges

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A season of virginity
In your black eyes
Come to kill the demons
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Narrowing down the edge
Your voice scratches
All strings of my torn heart
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Hot summer day your body
In the winter frost
I will be alive coldly
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Phantom of liberty some here
Break chains of regret
I will fly tomorrow
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Beacon of sigh dies no more
Autumn shadows in you
Live happily with sigh
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Waiting for the sun is void
Son is on his way
Sun is soaring so far
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She was sense of god
God devoured her once
I forgot feeling pain
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I run in yellow meadows
Remembering you green
One day we lay on it
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Madly looking at you calm
Blood freezes in summer
I stop breathing madly
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Trees are bending to winter
I stand still, stone
You bend quickly to death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 12 May 2012

Bright and stunningly beautiful collection.Wish very much to read more gaiku by you.Yuh's got the talent.Congratulations

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

The collections was greatly inspired by dark, it's original beautiful writes like them, I wait for another haiku collection which inspired by bright.i bet that must be greatly cool Dark and Bright obviously contrast but the contrast combination will make a stunning look...just see what black and white bring out, So my friend why not you make another 10 but bright side..keep writing :) Unwritten Soul

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Paw Paw 28 April 2010

It's good! I'm required to enter 20 characters, so: It's good It's good It's good It's good

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Your 10 Haiku are Ten High coos. Marvelous pieces.

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Carlos Cardona 06 April 2009

very refreshing i havn't done a haiku in years

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