Hope Poem by Amir Foroughi

Hope

Rating: 4.3


Are you still there in the shadows
Beyond edge of heaven
Waiting for the bells
Sigh of god
Are you still there?
I can’t even see you
Hallucination is my grace
See you ever smiling
Is my eternal face
Are you still there?
Sorrow shall not serenade
Harbinger of happy days
Are you still there?
My fallen angel
You not say farewell
Not rise out of dark hell
Waiting for the starlit
Are you still there?
Wondering ever made scars
Will evaporate from my face
Cleansing or baptizing the bloody pagan trace
Are you still there?
Concealed heart is my temple
Doom idols shall praise you not you
Are you still there?
I see you the last dream
Fog of black arcane sages
One last kiss
Are you still there?
Are you still there?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqeb Benazir 22 September 2011

yet again a brilliant write. and the flow it's also very much obvious and much like a song. i like the rhymes too. well depicted! !

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Mimi Mata 30 October 2012

I love your imagery and usage of words 10++++

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Elena Sandu 31 October 2012

Moving write, very alive..Maybe I could hear sound of hearts cracking, with each moment of silence.

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dr veenaa rai 24 July 2009

ur search for ur soul is intense...lovely write..may god bless u with everything u desire for...touched to read ur biography...10+

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~ Jon London ~ 24 July 2009

Very written piece, intense and raw emotion.....keep'm coming

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Bernard Snyder 30 October 2014

Great poem, Amir. 'Are you still there'...Very nice! Also, congrats on having this poem chosen as 'poem of the day'. Well-deserved. Best wishes!

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2014

Nice poem full of wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing

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Paul Sebastian 30 October 2014

Beautiful write! Where there's hope there is live. Enjoyed reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 October 2014

Are you still there? I see you the last dream Fog of black arcane sages One last kiss Are you still there? Are you still there? A beautiful poem on hope, hope that exists till the last beath!

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Emranor Reja 30 October 2013

twinkle hope across the poem

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