Amir Foroughi

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Hope - Poem by Amir Foroughi

Are you still there in the shadows
Beyond edge of heaven
Waiting for the bells
Sigh of god
Are you still there?
I can’t even see you
Hallucination is my grace
See you ever smiling
Is my eternal face
Are you still there?
Sorrow shall not serenade
Harbinger of happy days
Are you still there?
My fallen angel
You not say farewell
Not rise out of dark hell
Waiting for the starlit
Are you still there?
Wondering ever made scars
Will evaporate from my face
Cleansing or baptizing the bloody pagan trace
Are you still there?
Concealed heart is my temple
Doom idols shall praise you not you
Are you still there?
I see you the last dream
Fog of black arcane sages
One last kiss
Are you still there?
Are you still there?

Comments about Hope by Amir Foroughi

  • Bernard Snyder (10/30/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    Great poem, Amir. 'Are you still there'...Very nice! Also, congrats on having this poem chosen as 'poem of the day'. Well-deserved. Best wishes! (Report) Reply

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  • Babatunde Aremu (10/30/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Nice poem full of wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (10/30/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! Where there's hope there is live. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/30/2014 2:42:00 AM)

    Are you still there?
    I see you the last dream
    Fog of black arcane sages
    One last kiss
    Are you still there?
    Are you still there?
    A beautiful poem on hope, hope that exists till the last beath!
    (Report) Reply

  • Emranor Reja (10/30/2013 3:40:00 AM)

    twinkle hope across the poem (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (10/31/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Moving write, very alive..Maybe I could hear sound of hearts cracking, with each moment of silence. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Dillon (10/30/2012 5:42:00 PM)

    very good poem, once there is life there is always hope. (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2012 4:44:00 PM)

    Amir, you have without doubt touched the little child in of me... (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    Amir Forougi ypu have without doubt touched the little child in of me... (Report) Reply

  • Mimi Mata (10/30/2012 4:06:00 PM)

    I love your imagery and usage of words 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    28 X
    20 V
    19 I

    Hope should not have more questions
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  • Unwritten Soul (10/5/2011 2:01:00 AM)

    Hope should not have more questions, afraid it turn doubt...Not wrong to have hope and but high hopes make sure dont make you down if you cant tie with your reality ropes..Amir, Dont be afraid of the future dont you ever...let your hope be part of you my friend, let it be...Because when you used to live in the dark and no hope inside, will going nowhere, static and sad never ending...time to move on, time to get all freedom..dream well Amir, dont ignore it and let it have some hope may you will find a way to back home :)
    ..You really talented, but now you stop writing...WHY? keep new piece coming :) Go on for new emotion, bright for sure..Have a great future my friend Amir_Unwritten Soul
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  • Aqeb Benazir (9/22/2011 12:45:00 PM)

    yet again a brilliant write. and the flow it's also very much obvious and much like a song. i like the rhymes too. well depicted! ! (Report) Reply

  • (7/31/2009 4:57:00 AM)

    Hope only become visible once worked out! (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/26/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    The shadows and dust, will be the guidance of our next life, when this life is doomed.Good job Amir! (Report) Reply

  • (7/25/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    It told me to tell you............ yes, its here
    when you wake in the morn....... proof
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  • (7/25/2009 11:17:00 AM)

    beautiful expressions used to describe hope (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/24/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Yes, a hope is still there. Keep searching in the shadows beyond edge
    of heaven. Wonderful poem, Amir. Touched my heart. Keep sharing.
    Best Wishes
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  • (7/24/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    Very written piece, intense and raw emotion.....keep'm coming (Report) Reply

  • (7/24/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    ur search for ur soul is intense...lovely write..may god bless u with everything u desire for...touched to read ur biography...10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011

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