Being & Nothingness Poem by Amir Foroughi
Being & Nothingness
If you want me to be
I will just be.
If you want me not to be
I still shall be.
Oh my redeemer, nothing can change the life
Even the elemental force of your love
In motion,
Creation is essentially not the fact.
Being or nothingness,
Is motion,
But not the fact or a virtue.
Regret for the gleaning days.
Louts are everywhere.
I want to be with you
But desolate tree is in nothingness.
Not being.
Retribution is a slapstick
Words are the true friends
If they let me be.
Grace is an evil
In motion
Not creation
Production
Not creation but motion.
Chapel of sinners is empty with dust
No sinners
But in motion of reality in production
So let me be
Just be…
We are His creation so we can not exist without Him....Lovely abstract poem, very well written.Be blessed..10++++
TO LIVE LIFE KING SIZE AND TO FEEL AND ENJOY ITS MOMENTS IS TO BE! NOT A PASSIVE EXISTENCE BUT AN ACTIVE INTELLECTUAL AND THOUGHTFUL EXISTENCE! FOR YOUR POEM 10! -Raj
It is really a beautiful poem conveying hidden truth of life.... :)
A very nice piece of work. Keep it up that we may also learn from you. Thank you. E.K.L.
If you want me to be I will just be. If you want me not to be I still shall be. Oh my redeemer, nothing can change the life Even the elemental force of your love In motion, Creation is essentially not the fact. Empowerment...Absolute Empowerment in it's raw beauty...
A grand piece! I enjoyed reading this one.Also very good it can be read on many maybe philosophic and religious level.But the majestic ability belongs to you.Personally I am grateful because you shared with us who have learnt so much from you.Thank you
I think this is meant as a parody on the abstract language of philosophers, sometimes going overboard in their seriousness about being and nothingness. I enjoyed the poem as such
Wisdom resonates in your verses, a poem with deep meanings. Very well written..Cristina Teodor
Being and Nothingness...like people ask Here but nowhere, a definition mot mean exact words but as long as you understand what it is about everything can be clear..This is a good abstract poem, maybe people can understand in their own way...like i do..keep it up_Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 10:37:19 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A powerful poem. Though provoking. Kudos.