Amir Foroughi

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10 Haiku Dirges - Poem by Amir Foroughi

A season of virginity
In your black eyes
Come to kill the demons
Narrowing down the edge
Your voice scratches
All strings of my torn heart
Hot summer day your body
In the winter frost
I will be alive coldly
Phantom of liberty some here
Break chains of regret
I will fly tomorrow
Beacon of sigh dies no more
Autumn shadows in you
Live happily with sigh
Waiting for the sun is void
Son is on his way
Sun is soaring so far
She was sense of god
God devoured her once
I forgot feeling pain
I run in yellow meadows
Remembering you green
One day we lay on it
Madly looking at you calm
Blood freezes in summer
I stop breathing madly
Trees are bending to winter
I stand still, stone
You bend quickly to death

Comments about 10 Haiku Dirges by Amir Foroughi

  • (5/12/2012 5:51:00 AM)

    Bright and stunningly beautiful collection.Wish very much to read more gaiku by you.Yuh's got the talent.Congratulations (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/24/2011 6:17:00 AM)

    The collections was greatly inspired by dark, it's original beautiful writes like them,
    I wait for another haiku collection which inspired by bright.i bet that must be greatly cool
    Dark and Bright obviously contrast but the contrast combination will make a stunning look...just see what black and white bring out, So my friend why not you make another 10 but bright side..keep writing :) Unwritten Soul
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  • (4/28/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    It's good! I'm required to enter 20 characters, so: It's good It's good It's good It's good (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    Your 10 Haiku are Ten High coos. Marvelous pieces. (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    very refreshing i havn't done a haiku in years (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 31, 2009

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