10 Haiku Dirges Poem by Amir Foroughi

10 Haiku Dirges

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A season of virginity
In your black eyes
Come to kill the demons
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Narrowing down the edge
Your voice scratches
All strings of my torn heart
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Hot summer day your body
In the winter frost
I will be alive coldly
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Phantom of liberty some here
Break chains of regret
I will fly tomorrow
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Beacon of sigh dies no more
Autumn shadows in you
Live happily with sigh
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Waiting for the sun is void
Son is on his way
Sun is soaring so far
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She was sense of god
God devoured her once
I forgot feeling pain
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I run in yellow meadows
Remembering you green
One day we lay on it
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Madly looking at you calm
Blood freezes in summer
I stop breathing madly
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Trees are bending to winter
I stand still, stone
You bend quickly to death

Friday, January 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: chains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 12 May 2012

Bright and stunningly beautiful collection.Wish very much to read more gaiku by you.Yuh's got the talent.Congratulations

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

The collections was greatly inspired by dark, it's original beautiful writes like them, I wait for another haiku collection which inspired by bright.i bet that must be greatly cool Dark and Bright obviously contrast but the contrast combination will make a stunning look...just see what black and white bring out, So my friend why not you make another 10 but bright side..keep writing :) Unwritten Soul

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Paw Paw 28 April 2010

It's good! I'm required to enter 20 characters, so: It's good It's good It's good It's good

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Your 10 Haiku are Ten High coos. Marvelous pieces.

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Carlos Cardona 06 April 2009

very refreshing i havn't done a haiku in years

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