Amir Foroughi

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Don'T Fall Asleep - Poem by Amir Foroughi

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To my beloved and her lost grave
Uncanny
Emerald eyes of her over to save
Me, nothing more to be say
When she wept the cry of silence
Forgive me for all I was
Forgive me for all I shall not
Watt
Before the rut
Uncanny
Voices of all strings
Shattered in tornado
Tornado of blood
Blood of loss
Uncanny
No words
Words words words
I felt like the ghost of laura


Comments about Don'T Fall Asleep by Amir Foroughi

  • Nader Baheri (11/27/2012 10:08:00 AM)


    admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses.
    i enjoyed its bitter style.
    thankenstein~nb
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  • Nader Baheri (11/27/2012 10:07:00 AM)


    admirable, fascinating one.with wonderful flowing of prosees and verses.
    i enjoyed its bitter style.
    thankenstein~nb
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  • (11/26/2012 11:29:00 AM)


    Hi,
    Impressive, Well done, Very very touching.
    Forgive me for all I was
    Forgive me for all I shall not
    I dont know why but It reminds me one of those poem that I read while passing university courses, Its name is C.L.M By John Masefield.
    Hope to read more of you: p: p: p
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  • Unwritten Soul (10/4/2011 11:32:00 AM)


    So deep like always, but what a sad thing is you always make me sad...Wish there's some poem of yours make me smile again...Write more Amir, dont forget you hold talents that people rarely have...Keep on :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2010 1:40:00 AM)


    I just have to echo what the others said.. this poem has a good flow.. and is a bit interesting.. thank you for sharing this.. (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2010 12:24:00 PM)


    I like it, Very interesting, I like your work :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2010 12:24:00 PM)


    I like it, Very interesting, I like your work :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2009 3:42:00 AM)


    nice work, Amir
    i admire ur diction of love
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  • (7/8/2009 11:46:00 PM)


    deep and interesting..fine flow to it (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2009 10:13:00 AM)


    Very Interesting, Really well penned. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2009 6:19:00 PM)


    this poem has a good flow
    and was interesting
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 30, 2009



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