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(100) Time Passed Me By

Rating: 5.0

All dressed up and no where to go.
would love to see a picture show.
Who cares!
Who wants me?
I’m old, cracked and crusted you see.
The years have taken their toile on me.
I no longer have smooth beautiful skin,
instead, I’m wrinkled saggy, with a sloppy chin.
My boobs that stood pert and showy for all to see,
now hang to my knees, flat as can be.

What say you, when you look at me,
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Poison 9901 31 August 2007

I love the humor in this one, although the questions asked from a wife or even a girl friend are those of the most dangerous kind to us guys. I really love the description in this one, and the humor. Thanks once again for another brilliant piece. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Pia Andersson 07 April 2007

Melvina you are so brave! You write about life...the way it really is...you write about loneliness and pain in a way that we can understand. You write about what we feel but are too afraid to show With love and care Pia

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Catastrophe King 17 February 2007

My My...... You really do have a way to proove that you are a poet. You have a way to express... you have a way with words! You write so well! BTW... we know its not true.... of what you say for yourself in the poetry... but those concluding lines were more true!

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David Harris 17 February 2007

Melvina, what a lovely bit of humour. It cheers up all who read it. Especially all with the Crow feet around their eyes and the bags under them, not forgetting the triple chin. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 February 2007

I like it Melvina...

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Diane Violet 17 February 2007

Have to agree, fine piece of humor Melvina! Hugs, Diane

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Geoff Warden 16 February 2007

Wierd mood or not this is a fine piece of humor and a great way to start the nite.... thanx Melvina

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