Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Rookie - 0 Points (21/8/1998 / Cochin(India))

(105) Dark Circles Are Cool - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

I couldn’t sleep last night
I couldn’t sleep even an hour
I couldn’t sleep how hard I tried
With all my might and power
I remember being awake
Those eight hours I was alive
Ten, eleven, twelve, one
Two, three, four, five
I have ugly dark circles under my eyes
Now, how am I to go to school?
All I have to hope is that
My classmates think it’s cool!

Comments about (105) Dark Circles Are Cool by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • (1/27/2008 9:17:00 AM)

    Tee hee... I really liked this one... I can definitly relate to it... I actually didn't get any sleep last night... I watched a movie and have been exploring this site for almost four hours... so I am really hoping that dark circles are cool right now too. (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (8/29/2007 6:49:00 AM)

    I guess that means you went to school and that for sure is very cool,
    wonderful read Risha.--Melvina--
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  • (7/18/2007 9:54:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this one... makes me cool too then. I couldn't sleep a wink last night!
    A delight as always young lady!
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  • (7/18/2007 9:11:00 PM)

    Very charming. I am sure you are a 'cool' little girl with or without the dark circles.
    Take care.

    Warm regards,

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

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