Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(011) A Dream Which Never Came True - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

If only I could fly
And soar up so high
I want to touch the sky so blue
But it never came true
I want to touch a cloud
Meet a bird that sings loud
I want to change the weather
Sit on a cloud and play with a feather
I wish this dream could come true
Or else I shall always stay blue.


Comments about (011) A Dream Which Never Came True by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • (1/21/2018)

    I like it! Good writer. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (5/11/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    I expect a bright future for this lovely poetess. (Report)Reply

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  • Shihabudheen K J (9/29/2011 11:20:00 PM)

    nice poem.good imagination. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/5/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    WOW.........................
    r u really 11... i cant believe...............
    i wish i could right like u...............
    nice dream. i too dream the same..........
    but it will never come true............
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/20/2007 4:59:00 AM)

    Better your wish is sky so high, that atleast you will go near hand-reach (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2007 7:13:00 AM)

    What beatful dream! ! I enjoyed it with smiling. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2007 5:07:00 AM)

    A little lady like you feeling blue, come on girl that just wont do... Risha... keep dreaming do... oh and 10 for you... (Report)Reply

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  • (2/1/2007 10:59:00 PM)

    This poem is very interesting (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2007 9:23:00 AM)

    Maybe this dream hasn't come true, but may you always follow your dreams, they will lead you far.
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (12/18/2006 9:39:00 PM)

    Blue is not your color Risha, another wonderful poem. Love and Hugs, Diane (Report)Reply

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  • (11/29/2006 11:08:00 AM)

    Risha,
    I feel what makes you special is that you have the imagination of a child, but the craft of a senior poet. I feel fresh after reading each of your poems. Keep writing.
    Raghavan uncle.
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  • (11/5/2006 2:33:00 AM)

    dream big, gal! ! ....

    life is waiting for you...

    Asma...
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  • (10/8/2006 7:14:00 AM)

    hey nice poem dont we all wish we could fly at some point of our lives..im really quite astonished that a 8 yr girlcan write such nice poetry keep it up... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2006 7:13:00 AM)

    hey, don't be blue, be ever changing like the sky. Nice poem!

    Preets
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 25, 2010


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