(013) My Baby Cousin (Lovely Zaara) Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(013) My Baby Cousin (Lovely Zaara)

Rating: 3.3

She looks straight into my brown eyes
And creeps so very near
She pulls my hair so very hard
That I say 'oh my dear! '
She crawls about and comes to me
And then she licks my face
Then she sits so quietly and
In her mouth is a lace
She makes noises when she drinks milk
She doesn’t like her food
And when it comes to laughing
She is very very good
In Hindi we call this baby
Ek chamakta taara*
And the baby who we call that
is my cousin Zaara.

A shining star*

(she is one today.25/03/2007)

Cyclopseven R 05 January 2007

beautiful one, Risha.

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Dee Daffodil 05 January 2007

Babies can be so much fun...it sounds like you have a wonderful new addition to your family. Hugs, Dee

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Prasanna Kumari 26 December 2006

you make us see and feel her presence, , , beautiful poem, well done risha

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Diane Violet 25 December 2006

Risha, this is so cuddly and cute. A fine poem for your baby cousin. Love and hugs, Diane

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June30 Tara 25 December 2006

Such a sweet poem...Risha.. Keep writing... Love Tara

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Liza Sudina 26 September 2015

great poem about Zara! nice rhyming, iambic rhythm! 10+++

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What a lovely, loving tribute to a beautiful baby girl named Zaara.

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Risha, Very wonderful poem! You got my vote,10! Keep up the great work! hugs and kisses, Cassy :)

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Someone Else 23 March 2007

much better control of tempo and rhyme and a seemingly higher comfort level with a story that is so familiar to you. Nicely done.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

A shinning star and a rising star of poetry... Risha well done 10...

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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