(008) Troublesome Creatures Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(008) Troublesome Creatures

Rating: 3.2

Buzzing around every night
From the ditches they take flight
Sucking blood from me and you
And other animals too
These mosquitoes spread a disease
(Not the one that makes me sneeze)
Malaria is what they spread
It makes us sick and sleep in bed
They spread other diseases too
Like chikungunia and dengue
Beware of these troublesome creatures
I am telling you they are not preachers.

Asma Bahrainwala 02 March 2007

a cute poem, Risha... indeed, these mosquitoes are real troublesome creatures! ... never thought they could be blasted like this in verse! ... love, Asma...

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Ramachandran Anilkumar 02 March 2007

risha I read your three latest works. enjoyed too like other of yours... continue dear daughter.....more and more 'a load'.... Iexpect UNCLE

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

Buzzing around my head how i wish the darn things where dead... Risha... Like your great poems little lady... Always buzzing inside my head...: ->

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David Harris 18 March 2007

Risha, another delightful offering from your eloquent pen I loved the poem, but not the little insects you spoke about. Thanks for sharing it. Big10 from me. David

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Diane Violet 20 March 2007

Yes Risha, they are troublesome creatures, wonderful write! ! Love and hugs, Diane

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014

The poem shows her mental age is more than12. A nice write.

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Shihabudheen K J 29 September 2011

nice warning poem.i liked it

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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009

But U the little one is a preacher... regards Sandhya

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John Nightingale 02 January 2008

Superb poem. Thanks.

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Someone Else 23 March 2007

cute udea and nice warning with some new words to my experience. will add them to my vocabulary base

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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