Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(008) Troublesome Creatures - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Buzzing around every night
From the ditches they take flight
Sucking blood from me and you
And other animals too
These mosquitoes spread a disease
(Not the one that makes me sneeze)
Malaria is what they spread
It makes us sick and sleep in bed
They spread other diseases too
Like chikungunia and dengue
Beware of these troublesome creatures
I am telling you they are not preachers.


Comments about (008) Troublesome Creatures by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • Akhtar Jawad (5/11/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    The poem shows her mental age is more than12. A nice write. (Report)Reply

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  • Shihabudheen K J (9/29/2011 11:18:00 PM)

    nice warning poem.i liked it (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    But U the little one is a preacher...
    regards
    Sandhya
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  • (1/2/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    Superb poem. Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/23/2007 4:39:00 PM)

    cute udea and nice warning with some new words to my experience. will add them to my vocabulary base (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2007 11:26:00 AM)

    Very cute and how true also. Risha, you are one clever girl. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2007 8:01:00 AM)

    Yes Risha, they are troublesome creatures, wonderful write! !
    Love and hugs,
    Diane
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  • (3/18/2007 11:22:00 AM)

    Risha, another delightful offering from your eloquent pen I loved the poem, but not the little insects you spoke about. Thanks for sharing it. Big10 from me.
    David
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  • (3/14/2007 4:47:00 AM)

    Buzzing around my head how i wish the darn things where dead... Risha... Like your great poems little lady... Always buzzing inside my head...: -> (Report)Reply

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  • (3/13/2007 11:16:00 AM)

    nice risha, I avoid the 'sting' too. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2007 10:44:00 PM)

    THAT WAS EXCELLENT! ! ! ! ! Great write.
    Smiles N Hugs
    Rissa: -)
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  • (3/2/2007 5:15:00 AM)

    risha I read your three latest works. enjoyed too like other of yours...
    continue dear daughter.....more and more 'a load'.... Iexpect
    UNCLE
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  • (3/2/2007 3:42:00 AM)

    a cute poem, Risha...
    indeed, these mosquitoes are real troublesome creatures! ...
    never thought they could be blasted like this in verse! ...

    love,
    Asma...
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 25, 2011


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