Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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(008) Troublesome Creatures

Rating: 3.2
Buzzing around every night
From the ditches they take flight
Sucking blood from me and you
And other animals too
These mosquitoes spread a disease
(Not the one that makes me sneeze)
Malaria is what they spread
It makes us sick and sleep in bed
They spread other diseases too
Like chikungunia and dengue
Beware of these troublesome creatures
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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2014
The poem shows her mental age is more than12. A nice write.
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Shihabudheen K J 29 September 2011
nice warning poem.i liked it
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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009
But U the little one is a preacher... regards Sandhya
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John Nightingale 02 January 2008
Superb poem. Thanks.
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Someone Else 23 March 2007
cute udea and nice warning with some new words to my experience. will add them to my vocabulary base
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Patti Masterman 20 March 2007
Very cute and how true also. Risha, you are one clever girl.
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Diane Violet 20 March 2007
Yes Risha, they are troublesome creatures, wonderful write! ! Love and hugs, Diane
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David Harris 18 March 2007
Risha, another delightful offering from your eloquent pen I loved the poem, but not the little insects you spoke about. Thanks for sharing it. Big10 from me. David
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007
Buzzing around my head how i wish the darn things where dead... Risha... Like your great poems little lady... Always buzzing inside my head...: ->
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Howard Johnson 13 March 2007
nice risha, I avoid the 'sting' too.
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