(016) On Vacation Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
(016) On Vacation
My family went on a vacation
I gave my father all the persuasion
Can I go and wander in the forest
To catch at least a tiny little pest
Very dangerous it is for you to go there
There will be a lion, tiger or a big black bear
He told me, to these things pay heed
But I thought these are things I don’t need
I went to the depth of the forest
But couldn’t catch a single pest
Thinking about things I shouldn’t care
A lion, tiger or a big black bear
I started going towards a cave
Suddenly a loud roar it gave
I thought this was a good part of my vacation
When suddenly I felt suffocation
I heard the loud roar again
I felt as if I was trapped in a monster’s den
The loud roar had really given me a scare
It could be a lion, tiger or a big black bear
First it’s my life I have to save
I quickly ran out of the cave
To these things I should pay heed
Go to that cave I won’t dare indeed
Excellent piece of poetry from such a young writer. Well done Hugs, Dee
Exceptional vacation poem Risha......................Love and Hugs, Diane
My god! ! ! I will not... I am scared... If U come with me I will try regards Sandhya
What a wonderful adventurous poem! ! It was fun to read and as always it shows how talented a writer you R Risha! I enjoyed your 'favourite poem'.... Great imagery and title and I just like U would no longer go looking for a lion, tiger or a big black bear...((SMile)) Keep sharing................u r good at what u do. =Shelley=
nicely done story poem about the value of advice from guardians who know and care. Technical discipline is getting better as allocuted in my previous missives.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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6/25/2022 12:33:34 PM # 1.0.0.988
good work............... keep writing wishes jibin