(016) On Vacation Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(016) On Vacation

Rating: 2.9

My family went on a vacation
I gave my father all the persuasion
Can I go and wander in the forest
To catch at least a tiny little pest
Very dangerous it is for you to go there
There will be a lion, tiger or a big black bear
He told me, to these things pay heed
But I thought these are things I don’t need
I went to the depth of the forest
But couldn’t catch a single pest
Thinking about things I shouldn’t care
A lion, tiger or a big black bear
I started going towards a cave
Suddenly a loud roar it gave
I thought this was a good part of my vacation
When suddenly I felt suffocation
I heard the loud roar again
I felt as if I was trapped in a monster’s den
The loud roar had really given me a scare
It could be a lion, tiger or a big black bear
First it’s my life I have to save
I quickly ran out of the cave
To these things I should pay heed
Go to that cave I won’t dare indeed

Jibin Joseph 24 December 2006

good work............... keep writing wishes jibin

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Patricia Gale 01 January 2007

A fine story, a lesson inside....

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Dee Daffodil 05 January 2007

Excellent piece of poetry from such a young writer. Well done Hugs, Dee

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Mary Das 25 January 2007

Beautiful story poem. Well done.

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Diane Violet 25 January 2007

Exceptional vacation poem Risha......................Love and Hugs, Diane

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bobBy 20 October 2020

BRUHHH what if ur name is less than 5 characters

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marivic Rosario 08 June 2010

reminded me something..

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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009

My god! ! ! I will not... I am scared... If U come with me I will try regards Sandhya

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What a wonderful adventurous poem! ! It was fun to read and as always it shows how talented a writer you R Risha! I enjoyed your 'favourite poem'.... Great imagery and title and I just like U would no longer go looking for a lion, tiger or a big black bear...((SMile)) Keep sharing................u r good at what u do. =Shelley=

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Someone Else 23 March 2007

nicely done story poem about the value of advice from guardians who know and care. Technical discipline is getting better as allocuted in my previous missives.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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