***~~~~17+5 Years****~~~~~ Comments

Until we fall in love we dream of it.. And then it comes true.... A beautiful poem.. It is a pity that you are no longer active here... If you ever return, and see this.. Thanks for the poem., it is beautiful...

I love the passage with the orange, Fruit and Human Love reflect each other. Both are sweet, both can grow sweeter or fade, both are consumed by Life. But the Gibran quotation gives us faith in both love and nature. He creates a new reality through words that his waking life is a different kind of dream world. And your poem performs the same miracle for your life.

Hi dear Negar, NICE JOB It's nice to see an iranian write how beautiful.I give you 10. I hope you'll continue your try as well as possible. your friend Mehraneh.

good piece...the inner feelings of love and emotion perfectly spilling out in your poem lines...well done, Negar...i give you 10

Very intriguing piece trying to figure out what all has happened and is happening. A well chosen quote to introduce this poem. I would prefer a better word than “luck” though; maybe “this miracle, this happening or happenstance”.

Captures the real basic simplicity of love well