#17762009-July

Rating: 4.4
Attitudes of the old and new.
First can of coffee, pop-top-opens.
Food frozen from farmers toil.
Scoped-auto shotguns-hunt turkey dimmers.
Kids play sewing & knitting yesterdays.
Mom, hitches buggy-wagon to back
of auto-horse.
Whiteouts, partake parts of the Gov. Documents.
NOW PLAYING: [ gang leather rip offs
with kiddie porn ].
TV. replaces BIBLE, for after dinner
table sermons.
Candlesticks with light bulbs harness mans progress.
Surrealism becomes light of,
yesterdays shadows.

7/3/09 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES
Friday, July 3, 2009
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COMMENTS
comrade 7 27 June 2010
And democracy replacing ruthless rule... some good some worse. good thinking keep it burning. Pal.
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 January 2010
this one is really good! nice work!
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 December 2009
a good observation. thanks. shan
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Kesav Easwaran 27 November 2009
the changing/chage in attitudes...of young and old...your poem provides a true verbal image...good piece...thanks...10
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Ivy Blyth 04 October 2009
I love the pictures you paint in this poem. A very different July from the one experienced in the UK! Mainly rain!
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Anna Mae B. Angana 03 October 2009
in this fast pacing time, change is a normal thing...
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Paul Butters 19 September 2009
Too true. Telly, computers, internet....... Great write. P.
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Anand Madhukar 14 September 2009
Well, I guess thats the way it is....A meaningful write. I liked the style as well.
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Noel Horlanda 10 September 2009
If you're talking about time, well I can't add no more, you just said all about it, complicated but meaningful in thoughts.
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Frank Lambert 06 September 2009
Hi Poewhit, This is an interesting write. Things certainly move on and change. Sometimes for the better, sometimes not. Of course, not everything changes. Cheers, Frank
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