A Moth Wonder

Rating: 4.3
I sit in a supreme bliss.The world spins around in it's full
perfection. My mortal eyes fall upon a moth. There fluttering
before the presence of my mortal eyes. Captured nd
floating upon a fluttering air. It seems to have but little care.
Only to flutter upon the open air. What now, I see a tiny
look of beware.

Looking at me while it orbits my head. Maybe wondering if
I am really dead. A wave of the hand, to keep it still.. An
air-wave, seems to give it a thrill. Onward the moth flutters
away. Only to hide for another day. I'll sit and wonder why?
Only a moth or something, more sly.

2004
Thursday, October 30, 2008
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COMMENTS
Hannington Mumo 26 October 2015
Well-written, Joe. Keep writing...
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Spiritual Seeker 18 July 2011
My first encounter...A moth wonder, ...so captivating...looking forwards to read more..! Thanks
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Captivating read, full of imagination. Loved it! ; D
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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 June 2010
Great poem with good imagery enjoyed reading it....
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Looking at me while it orbits my head. Maybe wondering if I am really dead.... lot of things for hidden message.. really nice one o understand and capture imagination.. I enjoyed it full....10
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Ken E Hall 05 March 2010
A page from a tick of time...ready to crystalize alas no branches in your hair, images galore nice, regards
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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 December 2009
Moths are great as your poem Joe! And many thanks indeed for your lovely comment.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 November 2009
Onward the moth flutters away. Only to hide for another day. how nice.10 marks. shan
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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 October 2009
I'm frightened of moths.
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Emancipation Planz 25 September 2009
Hey Poewhit.... tis a HYMeNoptera metamorph that you sing here.... that takes a moth of wonder, to the mother of all wonders... entomololgy bite me! ! !
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