Alien Spaceman God Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Alien Spaceman God

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I look into heaven.
Stoned out after seven.
On my back alone.
All the stars shone.
All is your presence, GOD.
My back upon dirt sod.
Why a spaceship wonder?
That is man's simple blunder.
Who knows out in space.
We are your human race.
Energy matter to create.
Our souls inside its place.
We should worship you.
An alien from space true.
Looking out into deep space.
Only your size has place.
We look for flying saucers.
IMAGES, cloud our minds face.
GOD - you come from outer space.

from my book; - DREAMS 3 - published.2008
Joe Poewhit

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moushumi moushumi 07 March 2009

'GOD comes from outer space' - yes & took space in our brain as God centre. Very much appropriate vision about heaven...

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god can come from anywhere why not from space..where from we fear the alien attack

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Great poem Joe. God is everywhere as great universal force of love. In us, below us and above. Excellent writing. Karin Anderson

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Sabrina Jubahar 10 March 2009

Nice one, Joe. book? Wow. i'm curious about it.....

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 10 March 2009

keep up the good work

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Rachel Anderson 22 March 2010

A good poem that truly pictures god as some see him, an alien from afar. well done :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 March 2010

‘…IMAGES, cloud our minds face. / GOD - you come from outer space.’ What image? Our mundane thoughts here used as metaphor…? What we see is it delusion [as Hindu scripture says Non Dualist view] By IMAGES Hindus believe in idolatry … worship Idols as reflected God Dualistic view… A deep and contemplative poem … needs hearing [not reading] to sense [better word realize] the gamut of it… Thank you Sir…for paying a kind ear to my question… Affection obliged… niv

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Twiggy Tubercio 08 October 2009

Very very nice, it has a touch of philosophy and your own personality, very well written and gives something for the reader to walk away with

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Paul Butters 19 September 2009

Both space and religion fascinate me. You seem quite interested too. Understatement. Great poem. P.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2009

That is man's simple blunder. Who knows out in space. We are your human race. Energy matter to create. Our souls inside its place............. what are we doing outer space with spacecraft which can't succeed inspace without HIS grace...our souul is to be researched first then space.... it is for the scietific skill but mis advaentuares altogether.....10 read minesky is falling.... humble submission.. what do i seek

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