Alien Spaceman God Poem by JOE POEWHIT
Alien Spaceman God
I look into heaven.
Stoned out after seven.
On my back alone.
All the stars shone.
All is your presence, GOD.
My back upon dirt sod.
Why a spaceship wonder?
That is man's simple blunder.
Who knows out in space.
We are your human race.
Energy matter to create.
Our souls inside its place.
We should worship you.
An alien from space true.
Looking out into deep space.
Only your size has place.
We look for flying saucers.
IMAGES, cloud our minds face.
GOD - you come from outer space.
from my book; - DREAMS 3 - published.2008
Joe Poewhit
JESUS SAVES
Images cloud..our minds...true...as we all want God to look like..I don't know what? Good write and poses questions for all to ponder on.
Good one for the UFO afficionados who don't believe in the creator..nice poem.
Had a nice read...liked one line the most...'IMAGES, cloud our minds face'... Good thought
A wonderful idea and beautiful poetry. Good rhyme.......10.
A good poem that truly pictures god as some see him, an alien from afar. well done :)
‘…IMAGES, cloud our minds face. / GOD - you come from outer space.’ What image? Our mundane thoughts here used as metaphor…? What we see is it delusion [as Hindu scripture says Non Dualist view] By IMAGES Hindus believe in idolatry … worship Idols as reflected God Dualistic view… A deep and contemplative poem … needs hearing [not reading] to sense [better word realize] the gamut of it… Thank you Sir…for paying a kind ear to my question… Affection obliged… niv
Very very nice, it has a touch of philosophy and your own personality, very well written and gives something for the reader to walk away with
Both space and religion fascinate me. You seem quite interested too. Understatement. Great poem. P.
That is man's simple blunder. Who knows out in space. We are your human race. Energy matter to create. Our souls inside its place............. what are we doing outer space with spacecraft which can't succeed inspace without HIS grace...our souul is to be researched first then space.... it is for the scietific skill but mis advaentuares altogether.....10 read minesky is falling.... humble submission.. what do i seek
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I would like to translate this poem
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11/30/2023 4:26:42 AM # 1.0.0.1118
A good poem, showing God in different perspective. Kudos.