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Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Alien Spaceman God

Rating: 4.9
I look into heaven.
Stoned out after seven.
On my back alone.
All the stars shone.
All is your presence, GOD.
My back upon dirt sod.
Why a spaceship wonder?
That is man's simple blunder.
Who knows out in space.
We are your human race.
Energy matter to create.
Our souls inside its place.
We should worship you.
An alien from space true.
Looking out into deep space.
Only your size has place.
We look for flying saucers.
IMAGES, cloud our minds face.
GOD - you come from outer space.

from my book; - DREAMS 3 - published.2008
Joe Poewhit

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JOE POEWHIT
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Rachel Anderson 22 March 2010
A good poem that truly pictures god as some see him, an alien from afar. well done :)
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‘…IMAGES, cloud our minds face. / GOD - you come from outer space.’ What image? Our mundane thoughts here used as metaphor…? What we see is it delusion [as Hindu scripture says Non Dualist view] By IMAGES Hindus believe in idolatry … worship Idols as reflected God Dualistic view… A deep and contemplative poem … needs hearing [not reading] to sense [better word realize] the gamut of it… Thank you Sir…for paying a kind ear to my question… Affection obliged… niv
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Twiggy Tubercio 08 October 2009
Very very nice, it has a touch of philosophy and your own personality, very well written and gives something for the reader to walk away with
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Paul Butters 19 September 2009
Both space and religion fascinate me. You seem quite interested too. Understatement. Great poem. P.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2009
That is man's simple blunder. Who knows out in space. We are your human race. Energy matter to create. Our souls inside its place............. what are we doing outer space with spacecraft which can't succeed inspace without HIS grace...our souul is to be researched first then space.... it is for the scietific skill but mis advaentuares altogether.....10 read minesky is falling.... humble submission.. what do i seek
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A good poem, showing God in different perspective. Kudos.
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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 26 April 2009
Images cloud..our minds...true...as we all want God to look like..I don't know what? Good write and poses questions for all to ponder on.
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Lu-Lu Martin 04 April 2009
Good one for the UFO afficionados who don't believe in the creator..nice poem.
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Kranthi Pothineni 17 March 2009
Had a nice read...liked one line the most...'IMAGES, cloud our minds face'... Good thought
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 March 2009
A wonderful idea and beautiful poetry. Good rhyme.......10.
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