Afternoon Rain Poem Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Afternoon Rain Poem

Rating: 4.8

So is that time of day.
Some go for the hay.
Others try and find a way.
Yet, it is the end of day-almost.
Some just like to let it coast.
Some bring it in with a toast.
It is all part of the day.
Some even get a days pay.
So we reach into our hearts.
To take out the days darts.

Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

Hey Joe, what a way, to freely say what can go on in regular day, I like it, by the way, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Ric Bastasa 25 September 2009

keep wrting joe.. nice poems frm the heart

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Ivy Blyth 04 October 2009

I like your style of writing. I will be browsing - often.

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Moonbee Canady 01 November 2009

Very Nice Reminiscing... Poetical Indeed... Thank You For Sharing That Rainy Afternoon (I Too Love Rain) ending a full, satisfied day... MoonBee

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nomad omnia 28 November 2009

Nice one Joe. It fits this day perfectly. N

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Adeeb Alfateh 10 June 2019

Some just like to let it coast. Some bring it in with a toast. it's beautiful poem; great 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

It is all part of the day. Days are paid with great hopes. This poem is very brilliantly penned with perception of rain...10

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Marvin Brato 18 December 2017

Soothing afternoon rain cleanses the mind from stressful thoughts from work.. well said!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 13 July 2011

very well-said nice thought

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 January 2010

quite interesting! nice job!

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