Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Afternoon Rain Poem

Rating: 4.8
So is that time of day.
Some go for the hay.
Others try and find a way.
Yet, it is the end of day-almost.
Some just like to let it coast.
Some bring it in with a toast.
It is all part of the day.
Some even get a days pay.
So we reach into our hearts.
To take out the days darts.
Adeeb Alfateh 10 June 2019
Some just like to let it coast. Some bring it in with a toast. it's beautiful poem; great 10++++++++++++++++++++++
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019
It is all part of the day. Days are paid with great hopes. This poem is very brilliantly penned with perception of rain...10
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Marvin Brato 18 December 2017
Soothing afternoon rain cleanses the mind from stressful thoughts from work.. well said!
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very well-said nice thought
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 January 2010
quite interesting! nice job!
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nomad omnia 28 November 2009
Nice one Joe. It fits this day perfectly. N
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Moonbee Canady 01 November 2009
Very Nice Reminiscing... Poetical Indeed... Thank You For Sharing That Rainy Afternoon (I Too Love Rain) ending a full, satisfied day... MoonBee
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Ivy Blyth 04 October 2009
I like your style of writing. I will be browsing - often.
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Ric Bastasa 25 September 2009
keep wrting joe.. nice poems frm the heart
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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009
Hey Joe, what a way, to freely say what can go on in regular day, I like it, by the way, Love and Peace, Romeo
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