Abraham Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Abraham

Rating: 4.4


Under a mighty tree.
My lady beside me.
What did I notice true.
With old cloak, shrouded blue.
Walking on a beggars road.
Shadow cross of a load.
Looking fast, just by chance.
Did a two step of dance.
Onward passing sun an shadows.
My lady heard singing sparrows.
GODS heaven shade tree.
Abraham, Abraham, faith of thee.

copyright 11/19/2008 POEWHIT
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 29 November 2008

Beautifully written piece. Such an inspiration.

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Lilibeth Tello 01 December 2008

nicely written... enduring faith

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Patrick McFarland 18 January 2009

Lovely sentiment Joe.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 January 2009

The patriarch was a true man of spirits.we have forgotten him.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 06 April 2009

Wonderful write.. God rocks hehe good one sir - mel

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Whisperkwane Lamb 29 June 2010

Ah, thank God for old school thats where ABRAHAM is from...times are getting no better...back then...and ABRAHAM heard the words...and marched to the singing....and found shade...and other nice things that surrounded the area...a bit of heaven on earth...you did a fine job...If I did not believe in God...after your words I would have....

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2010

Inspiring lines..........................

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Ramin Chaman 27 November 2009

Hello Joe really a nice poem..is fine 10+

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Moonbee Canady 01 November 2009

Very Nice Poem... I Love The Topic of The Moment of Abraham's Seeing the Angels of God Incident. That's What It Brings To My Mind... You Brought the Moment To Life... Very Nicely Written... MoonBee

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Marieta Maglas 30 September 2009

wonderful symbolistic poem, very well written, be blessed..........10++++++++++

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