199. Why Can't We Poem by Jaden Knight

199. Why Can't We



Why can't we admit that we are flawed
instead of trying to perfect ourselves
perfection is a lie designed to make us fall
and so we do not rise the way we should
many remain staring at where they believe they should be

Why can't we admit we are lost
despite the fact there is no map
cartography is useless in this place
as we seem to make our own landmarks

Maybe we should admit we are wrong
instead we burrow deeper inside ourselves
hoping to be proved right this time
being wrong is not always a bad thing

It's ok to be imperfect here
as none of us ever will be pure
not a sin or crime to be lost
as none of us know where we are
being wrong is not punishable by death
expect at the end of life's days
and when those times do come
that is when we know who we truly are

Saturday, April 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 April 2015

#200 didn't 'sit well' with me, so i moved on to #199. i like this one, though it obviously has NOTHING to do with ME. after all, i AM perfect...............in ever way i can think of at least. yes, i can't praise myself too highly. the sky isn't even the limit! ! BUT, this poem is good for THE REST OF YOU to read and ponder! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - favorite lines: many remain staring at where they believe they should be and Maybe we should admit we are wrong instead we burrow deeper inside ourselves hoping to be proved right this time being wrong is not always a bad thing ........ of course I never have to admit being wrong, since i'm NEVER WRONG1 thanks for sharing and congratulations on over 200 on PH. bri :)

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