1st June! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

1st June!



1st June!
Heart attack! !
Admitted at the hospital;
And this was the muse of my father-in-law!
But, on the same day was,
My child's first day at school.

The phone rang and,
The news came in! !
For, my father-in-law was admitted;
But, this day and date will always be remembered!
For, it was also my child's first day at school.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2015

So nicely penned with thrilling manner. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 08 June 2012

you twist and play with words to suite the situation than prolonged sentences... its just like our thoughts.....a remarkable usage! !

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