2/11/2008
Remember when he loved me
I was his world
Wanted to be with me always
We danced and we twirled
Used to be his #1
Now I'm second best
Everything comes before me
I feel like his foot rest
I don't know what has happened
I want to be his queen
Don't want this suicidal feeling
I need some morphine
I'll just have to deal with it
Try to keep my mouth shut
I love him so much
But right now I want to cut
Through these exasperating words a whole world of anguish flows from a dreamy past of a beautiful soul in love but lamenting the lover's switch over. The poem will be remembered for its immaculate beauty. Thanks. A quote: I feel like his foot rest / I love him so much / But right now I want to cut
An expression of deep emotional feeling thirsting for more love. Nice write! kudos
So many different forms of love - and such depth portrayed here... Aging we find better ways to cope with all the cracks and fissures in love - because it is something we do all of our lives.... Cutting oneself is never the answer - because the real guy - the one you meet later - the one who loves you - and who is right now looking for you - deserves the whole you - unfettered - unmarred - Look at your poetry! How wonderful this is! You have so much more value than what this subject of your poem offers back to you.... I hope you meant just 'cut' him out of your life...
Well said, John. I had the very same thoughts, except I thought by 'cut' she may have meant to scram, as in 'cut and run'.
You really express yourself well, Karina. Thanks for sharing. Congrats on being poet of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
2/11/2008 Remember when he loved me I was his world Wanted to be with me always We danced and we twirled again love the words in places - you have a good way of showing how you feel take care