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#24

Rating: 3.0

Things running through my mind
wondering if i did the right thing,
confused by millions of thoughts.

So lost in a world of thoughts,
as if drowning in sorrowful pain
full of rage to feel whole.

Why cant it just get better?

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Iron Panda 23™ 06 April 2010

woahss! ! i know exactly how this is... nice write! !

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 December 2009

it is the way you think, you achieve the goal the way you does work, ....wonderful thought,10+++, thanks for sharing

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James Mclain 30 May 2009

Is it a mind that always knows to suffer? Is it the pain of knowing no peace? Is it thoughts, that wont quite ever slow, so you can have just one chance to know them? Yes, it is all of that and more Anne, it's all of that and more...iip

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Priyanka Bhowmick 26 May 2009

it'll just get better. nice write. u can read mine 'a day full of anxiety'.

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