3: 17 Am: I Have Just Realized Poem by s./j. goldner

3: 17 Am: I Have Just Realized

Rating: 3.0


These poems have come
Without a bottle
A shot
A pint
A glass

A smoke
A high
A blunt
A bowl

A hangover

A lover
A cat
A family
A friend

Or even

A home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 04 January 2007

so simple, yet packs a punch, , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Ron Androla 17 February 2007

good one, yes. wld be wonderful read out loud.

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Someone Else 29 March 2007

leaves nothin' much more than the self awareness and imagination unabetted and unabated

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David Gerardino 07 April 2007

Without a bottle, great line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , i see this well..

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fanniesson - 19 April 2007

I’m thinking I was suppose to find this poem today. As I start my first day without......................... and not use that old standby excuse it helps me write

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Yoni Assis 06 June 2010

Save for the cat, my poems have been inspired by pretty much everything you've listed: / In all seriousness, though, this is another example of your ability to come up with a seemingly simple idea, and show that it's not simple at all. It looks innocuous, because of the length, but says so much.10.

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Waqas Naeem 27 December 2008

Brilliant...nothing to lose and everything to die for! straight 10 for you...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

An excellent job is done, very nice composition.10++

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James B. Earley 10 August 2008

And sometimes....without......a single clue!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

a plain life is a real life.......................

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