Monday, June 5, 2006

3: 17 Am: I Have Just Realized

Rating: 3.0
These poems have come
Without a bottle
A shot
A pint
A glass

A smoke
A high
A blunt
A bowl

A hangover

A lover
A cat
A family
A friend

Or even

A home.
s./j. goldner
Yoni Assis 06 June 2010
Save for the cat, my poems have been inspired by pretty much everything you've listed: / In all seriousness, though, this is another example of your ability to come up with a seemingly simple idea, and show that it's not simple at all. It looks innocuous, because of the length, but says so much.10.
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Waqas Naeem 27 December 2008
Brilliant...nothing to lose and everything to die for! straight 10 for you...
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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008
An excellent job is done, very nice composition.10++
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James B. Earley 10 August 2008
And sometimes....without......a single clue!
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008
a plain life is a real life.......................
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Kenneth Fordham 29 January 2008
But they do have a home. It is called your heart. They may come out to visit, but they will never leave. Good Job. Ken
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Dwayne Bailey 15 December 2007
Nice thoughts but who really knows where the thoughts of inspiration comes from. Thanks for sharing Dwayne
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Adeiza A. 10 November 2007
3: 17 am, a right time for such ideal thoughts as u've poured out here in your piece. I like this... cheers
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James Jason Dye 26 October 2007
And sometimes they do, but where they really come from is the question I suppose. Nice thought to ponder.
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Jon Alan 24 September 2007
You leave your readers with one question, dear one, where did this poem come from, but that is the point isn't it, - Lovely work.
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