A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem....[ A Topic/Title Suggested By Poemhunter Friend, Kim Barney ] Poem by Bri Edwards

A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem....[ A Topic/Title Suggested By Poemhunter Friend, Kim Barney ]

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Gather 'round, Children, and Bri shall tell you a tale...
about a Cat which, since birth, had no hair on its tail.
Oh, it HAD a tail, but it was a tail like that on a Snake,
and no hair did the cat's tail have, but still it did shake.

Yes, the Cat could shake its tail, though it had no hair,
and shake it the cat DID, at which People did STARE.
They thought: 'A cat with a tail that looks like a snake! '
And they thought, 'Look at that cat, for goodness' sake! ! '

The Cat's 'tail' had no hair. It was covered with scales.
Scales cover a snake, & look like tiny human fingernails.
There are lots of scales. They are small, smooth, & shiny.
The cat's were pink, not like the cat's hairs (white) , & tiny.

Imagine a CAT, mostly White, but with a shiny PINK tail! ! !
If you had LOTS of money, you'd not find ONE for sale,
.....UNLESS a cat tail's hair was dyed, but still was HAIR.
I think a cat with a snake's tail would, some people, scare!

A cat tail like THAT would also, for some, be a 'puzzle',
like a big blue moustache growing from a dog's muzzle.
Scientists and newspeople would surround them in a whirl,
as would happen if one found horns on head of a squirrel.

WHO owned the Cat? Do you think you can guess? Is it YOU?
Does it belong to a girl, boy, woman, man, or to TWO?
To your parents, an aunt & uncle, to grandparents, so OLD?
Did the cat have NO owner, .....and lived alone, so BOLD!

Would YOU love the cat, pet it, and teach it fo be BRAVE?
Would YOU be its best friend and teach it to BEHAVE? ?
Do YOU think maybe I made up this story in my HEAD? ?
Don't doubt me, but make up YOUR own ending INSTEAD! ! !


(August-September 2023)

bri edwards

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Friday, September 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,snake,tail-rhyme,for children
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 01 September 2023

FINALLY! ! THANKYOU, PoemHunter! ! ! ! ! bri ;)))) AND.....WELCOME TO ALL READERS AND ESPECIALLY TO THOSE WHO take the time to comment! ! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

....Boris Karloff was an English actor. His portrayal of Frankenstein's monster in the horror film Frankenstein (1931) (his 82nd film) established him as a horror icon, and he reprised the role for the sequels Bride of Frankenstein (1935) and Son of Frankenstein (1939) .

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M.J. Lemon 05 September 2023

pt.2. I can just hear Karloff's voice reading this verse. And with the end of October rapidly approaching, that might enliven the holiday season. Perhaps an annual event/reading? A most excellent verse, Bri.

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

Mark, Yes, Boris Karloff

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M.J. Lemon 05 September 2023

I really like this verse, Bri. It has a certain Dr. Seuss quality, but it also seems tinged with suspense or horror. If only Boris were still with us.

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

That's quite a leap from Dr. Seuss, of childrens' fantasy tales fame, to Boris K. well known for 'horror' movies, BUT as Frankenstein's Monster I believe he DID toss a kid into a lake. hmm?

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Kingsley Egbukole 04 September 2023

The fun you add to your poem makes it very interesting to read again and again. Collect all the stars.

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

Thanks, K, but I forgot to bring my star-collecting kit. ; ( bri

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M. Asim Nehal 04 September 2023

Enjoyable poem. It will keep Children busy finding such a funny Cat. Full *****

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

Yes, keeping the 'Little Brats' busy is the goal of teachers and librarians around the world! ! Thanks. : ) bri

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