God Knows.... A Simple Prayer Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

God Knows.... A Simple Prayer

Rating: 4.9


God knew that I need someone
To keep as a treasure in my heart.
Someone who is so true
Fine and caring.

God knew that I need smiles
To go on my hard way
And dress my wounds
With love.

God knew that I need the consciousness
Of someone who thinks of me
In the night when the moon shines
And water sleeps in comfort.

God knew that I need to share
My joys and sorrows
With someone who wiped my tears
And caressed my hair so lovingly.

God knew that I need a lap
Where I can sleep like a sweet cat
And get up to see the first rays of the sun
Which loves to shine in my eyes.

God knew and he gave ………..

(mixing up of the tenses in this poem is intentional)

God Knows.... A Simple Prayer
Sunday, May 23, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 15 April 2019

A gem of a love poem, and a joy to read- - Truly Beautiful! : -)

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2014

Doctor of..........? poetry? mixing up of the tenses in this poem is intentional) .............. i was getting ready to point out the mixing to you, but you anticipated my comment. does this signify that the someone was sent but is no longer around: ? ? a fine poem for romantics and lovers of love poems and perhaps religious poems. i am neither of those type of readers, BUT i enjoyed the poem nonetheless (well maybe a little less!) . Nature Knew Nature has a lot of power, so i asked.......... for a woman, .............knock on wood. I think Nature answered my call............ just as fast as she could. Now i've got a woman to cook, to clean, and keep me warm. I've settled for one at a time; after all, who needs a swarm? thanks for sharing and inspiring me to share with you! bri :)

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Anzelyne Shideshe 29 November 2015

God knew and he gave.........I like this stanza it let's the reader find out who this person is.You reminded me of the people that matter in my life.Today being a Sunday I thank God for them.

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Muzahidul Reza 06 April 2018

Yes, Almighty One God (I believe in Oneness that is God is One, He neither was / is / will be born by anyone nor He begot / begets / will beget anyone) knows everything and being about because He creates everything and being & manages and feeds all, So we all should pray to him for ourselves, Well penned poem, I will vote for it,10, thanks

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Great Reader 06 April 2018

True comment, loved, .................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 January 2021

Yes, he is omniscient! A humble composition. Wish you and your beloved family a happy and peaceful New Year 2021

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Beautifully written Tony and beautifully presented. What more is there to say, except, May God Bless and Keep you good sir and all the cherished ones around you. Merry Christmas, take care and I thank you again

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Chinedu Dike 29 November 2020

A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful piece written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Shaun Cronick 15 May 2020

A beautiful and most heart-felt touching piece of goodness wrapped up in a divine poem. Only this dear poet can write with such balance and harmony. 10++ and stay blessed good Tony.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2020

God knew that I need smiles To go on my hard way And dress my wounds With love.......smiles bring love and easiness to go on hard way. Great work my dear Dr Tony, thank you for sharing.

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