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I bet this really happened. I had a kid sister and it sounds like something I did with her. Only ours was a big hole in the back yard. Great work Dave. You can really bring on the laughs! Great rhyme and rhythm too! (10)

I read this one to my ten year old daughter who just happens to have a little brother who loves playing in the sand. She had a great chuckle! I thoroughly enjoyed this! Hugs, Dee

Such good fun this one Dave. A surprise last line adds the punch. Well done - more please. fondly Fay.

This is SOOO Sweet, and yet so innosent.... Very nice flow and a fine exucute! ! ! Bonnie