493 Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

493

Rating: 5.0


This time again
Tears taste, the same
This time around
Dark clouds surround
This time for sure
I'll care no more.
Nalini

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 17 July 2017

Hi Jyotsana, Beautiful poem. An ocean of emotions in so little words. So ordinary mundane words conjure up the life's intrigues in such intensity! ! It is a real mystery how you are able to do it. Great.100++

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Terry Craddock 06 January 2017

'Tears taste, the same' tears taste the same, cheeks fall, taste of salt like the sea like the sea when waves crush overpower we need not breathe close mouths hold breathes until we rise in current surge a beautiful sad poem 'This time for sure/ I'll care no more.' Alsways remember if your really feeling sad, like the beautiful siren lines in a song by Blondie, Call me, call me call me anytime

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Thanks Poet Terry. your inputs always awaited

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