5 Elements Of Life Poem by Jacqui Broad

5 Elements Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Is it fair,
to keep a
bird in cage?
Is it right,
to keep a
heart from love?
Is it nice,
to keep a
dog that bites?
Is it good,
to keep a
smile on face?
Is it just,
to keep a
faith that last?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 30 December 2011

Like this. A really great poem. Love it.

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Gordon Tseng 30 November 2011

Is it fun, to read a short, cute poem? Is it nice, to know a far-away poet?

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Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

Deep down in the poem runs an universal theme. Yes i see the U turn in your life. Anyway, You poems carries gold with cover of simplicity. A simple Gandhi, A simple Nelson Mandela... A simple Jacqui but life is tough nut to crack. it is the last straw that breaks the camel's hump. A tipsy-turvy life! An itsy-bitsy life. Any never lose the hop! fight against oddities in life then you can see the taste of howling success. My friend great poem................

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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 October 2011

so many questions but few answers.......this poem is talking to someone like me..

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Stefanie Fontker 11 October 2011

'Morality' is a subjective term. One may justify the murder of a million innocents, while another may condemn it all. Individuality is a funny thing.

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