Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

When You'Re Gone... - Poem by Jacqui Broad

How many sorrow in a single tear?
Four seasons in one day, instead of a year.
How many seconds in a stretched-out day?
I miss you when you are away.
How many songs can one guitar play?
When I long to hear the words you used to say.
How many times I've wished you wouldn't disappear?
Save me, I think tears and loneliness are creeping near...

Comments about When You'Re Gone... by Jacqui Broad

  • (12/29/2011 6:51:00 PM)

    That was so very moving.Your words convey so much
    You are welcome to visit my poetry.
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  • (12/12/2011 12:56:00 PM)

    Nice poem..variety of emotions blending into a single poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2011 7:13:00 AM)

    i love this poem.....well written... (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2011 1:22:00 PM)

    A very emotion packed poem.
    A really great write.
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  • Gordon Tseng (12/8/2011 12:28:00 AM)

    How many poems can you write,
    during those nights you can't see his eyes?

    Nice work!
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  • (12/7/2011 9:07:00 AM)

    Words very profound, words massanging a reflection of emotions and state of mind, words very I would like to relate myself to. I have much respect for your greatness Lady Broad, strong poem. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/7/2011 4:03:00 AM)

    'Tis a g'd poem and I love this, , I do write poems like this taste! ! ! !
    '''How many songs one guitar can play'''
    I love this line as the soul of this poem, , ,
    top marks for you! ! ! !
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  • Jinal Oswal (12/7/2011 3:24:00 AM)

    Jacqui i love this poem.. How many sorrow in a single tear? No one in this world will ever understand this.. the only person who can ans is you sweetheart... Its you who knows how you can put a stop... Tke cre dear.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2011 3:00:00 AM)

    i really like this write - words that sting the heart... such thoughts filled with sadness -great write! (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2011 11:54:00 PM)

    Great poem J, though bitter sweet...great write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2011 11:13:00 AM)

    oozes the sweet sadness of love and distance! good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/6/2011 7:28:00 AM)

    Love this big meaning words 'How many songs can one guitar play? ' wow as long as someone play the strings it will sing..but please let someone can play music to do that or our ears bleed and we plead to stop listening hahahahaha Nice write Jac! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 6, 2011

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