Never did I want to share my poetry.
To bare my soul and show pieces of me.
But I thought what's the use of writing then?
And so I've come to learn many a friend.
First there was Stephanie, young but so wise.
And Crimson Love, who's name I know, and she's so nice.
Dave, with his short comments, but still is great.
Sir Eric, who is a great poet, if I must rate.
Anele, the African son, whom comes from my land.
Siyabonga, as well, so their poetry I understand.
Asif, who always cordially invites me to read his poems.
Ahmed, too, who teaches me a lot I didn't know.
Vipins, his poems I thoroughly enjoy.
Jinal, sweet and special like a favorite toy.
Hans, who wrote me words of strength when I was in need.
Unwritten Soul, who is a great friend indeed.
Shadow Girl and Kara, I've only just met.
Daniel and others, I will never forget.
Harry whom I'm beginning to love as a soulmate.
To all my friends, each and everyone of you are great!
to all my friends, each and everyone of you, are great, , , you are great Jacqui, we've only been to you the kind of friends you've been to us, , am i lying sir Eric, Vipins, Dave, Crim, Anele, Shadow G, Harry, Soul, Hans, Jinal, Ahmed, Daniel, Kara, Asif, Silentpoet G, Rekha and everybody i didn't mention.......Siyabonga! ! ! !
And Guys I think I have a proBlem Sending inboxes to you. Though I can receive yours am not sure if you able to see my replies, I think its more of some technical issues..... WORD!
Dear Jacqui, This is a very touching poem indeed. So true. What a wonderful friendships we have developed through this website. For many of my poemhunter friends, I do not know thier faces, sometimes I even do not know their names, but they are my true friends. Because, like you said it so nicely, through our poems, we bare our soul, something many friends we know by face and name hardly do. I hope you and many of the ones you mention here, remain also my friends for many years to come.
Jacqui, I am blessed.. I am overwhelmed.. Its you who is so sweet and kind my dear.. I am always there for you and with you... Mental presence is more important than physically staying by your side.. So anytime.. anything you need.. I am there to hear you my sweetheart... I remembered the first time we had exchanged a message.. Thank you soo much my dear friend... A wonderful poem: D.. I am loving it! ! ! !
Oh African Ballerina! My love train and a love landscape with a fountain, I am thrilled my happiness has reached higher than Eiffel tower. Say it loudly time and again that i am you soul-mate for it is sweeter than divine music...... Oh love fife! you are special type Helen sent from heaven to give your love 24/7 to one and only your own Indian Dove - Harindhar Reddy known as HARRY! First there was Stephanie, young but so wise. And Crimson Love, who's name I know, and she's so nice. Hello Jacqui Broad thanks for referring the names of your friends and at the same time you have highlighted friendship itself. It is great honor to be called soul-mate from your mouth. it is a scintillating feeling..... But don't you know which is my favorite line 'Harry whom I'm beginning to love as a soulmate.' ha! ha! ha! take my smile and sell me your heart and I want to the owner of your heart. No rating and no dating as it is from your heart. :) :) :) :) :) :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
************************** Thou art a comely poem; For I shalt mount an ambrosial hill, To pluck with my golden quill- A nectarell flower, to let them- Be shined as stars in thy lock Caress its petals and speak- Unto me about its colour, Of that honied garland as my honour For You Jacqueline, oh, comely poem.... ******************************* I'm so glad for thou hast includ'd me too in this friendship poem, , , , Top marks for you; ,10+++++