5 More Minutes Poem by Nika McGuin

5 More Minutes

Rating: 5.0


It's latent
everything languid
my refusal to let go
of what's already gone
of that which was never
truly mine - it never got that far

Hesitant
willfully negligent
of the facts and my own common sense
but as the elders say "It'll all come out,
in the wash." you can't hide from the truth
it'll come looking for you - in your dreams
forcing you to behold its eerie countenance
decloaking its shadowy self before you

Stagnant
I know what I must do
I simply don't want to
I'm like a drowsy schoolkid in the morning
"Please 5 more minutes mom, I promise I will get up
I promise..."

Let me cling just a little longer...

Wednesday, April 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance,letting go
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

The things we hold on too…great poem! !

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Julia Luber 03 April 2019

in your dreams forcing you to behold its eerie countenance: very connecting imagery amidst a sense of emotional dependency- honest and moving/unafraid to express need: making something painful elegantly poetic

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