Makayla Straight
I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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60 Seconds With God

Rating: 4.7
Makayla you have to change.

I listened to what God told me.

Promise me Makayla, you'll show me your good side. I know it seems you have nobody to talk to. You think cares and love you. your WRONG. Makayla you have a lot of people all over this world who cares and loves you. You just need to love yourself to see it.

That 60 seconds with God changed my life. I opened my eyes to what is right in front of my eyes. Instead of looking beyond.. All I had to do is look right in fornt of me.
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COMMENTS
Adam Reed 14 May 2011
ive had tons of those conversations. none of them were able to stick with me all that well but i hope its different for you. faith is a hard thing to come by
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* Stephen *king 03 April 2010
wow..........good time with god...........
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Hunter Dasten 28 January 2010
I very much enjoy the idea you've broached here, a conversation with God. It's a great concept but I think you could make this a truly fantastic piece by expanding upon the idea! Good job.
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I really like this, not so much as a poem, but I really like your attitude. What you figured out, what God told you, is what so many people can't see, and what so many people refuse to believe. If everyone could find others that care about them, then the world could be a much better place.
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Emma Adamyan 15 July 2009
i was right abt u as a poetess. ur a great one. keep on doing and always try ur best, as u do now. thank u
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Dylan Oppedahl 12 July 2009
All you need is 60 seconds. That was really good
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Victor Sklyarov 30 June 2009
HE is right. With love from Russia, Vic
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 June 2009
Look right in front of you, you'll see happiness - writing poetry is that gentle and peaceful happiness - it is finding yourself.
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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009
There comes such moments in life when one feels terribly alone and insecure yet if one repents for what he or she had done in the past, one can really recoup with the will of God and get back to the normalities of life with a new vision and a pragmatic approach.....This poem should render all those people to think who may well have lost and got directionless........10/10
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Rey Sanidad 07 June 2009
It is good to see finally the light...
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