(689) You Can'T Touch Me Poem by Melvina Germain

(689) You Can'T Touch Me

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You Can’t Touch Me

You can’t touch me
I have the strength of dolphins soaring o’re the sea
You can’t touch me
Iam the cunning tiger hidden behind the forest trees
You can’t touch me
I’am the flames that burn beneath the earth
You can’t touch me
I’am the glitter of diamonds rough
You can’t touch me
I’am the snow and the rain
I can give you health or take away your pain
but you can’t touch me just the same.

Written: Jan.12,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JoAnn McGrath 12 January 2008

BOY: O) ...you are on a roll tonight...Good to see you at it's finest: O)

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The repetition works wonderfully, it's a very empowering poem from my view. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and will be back for more. Thank you for posting, L&T

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Cecil Hickman 18 January 2008

I know I can't touch you since you live so far away, , , I know funny Ha Ha, , , this here shows your strength and power which flows in every line, , , blessings my friend...Cecil

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Sandra Fowler 14 January 2008

Bold, brave, and beautiful. This one has my applause. Warm regards, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 14 January 2008

another wow from me! powerful lines, powerful words from a very powerful woman here in PH

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David Harris 13 January 2008

Mel, WOW! You certainly have been on a roll of late. Another beautiful gem to add to your collection. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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