6th (The Positive Side) Poem by Balint Nagy

6th (The Positive Side)

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(V1)
Alcohol and nicotine
Ritalin and sweet caffeine
I want some more amphetamine
That's the deal: I giving in

(Chor)
The choice was yours, the pain is mine
The positive side of me has died
(2x)

(V2)
We were friends; I don't want to be enemies
Even there's no place for apologies
But you should see my condition, it's critical
And you know I am not saying my words cynical
I'm going insane; is anybody listening?
When I struggle with this fucking misery

(Chor)
The choice was yours, the pain is mine
The positive side of me has died
(2x)

(Refr.)
And while you live, you'll watch me die
The positive side of me,
The positive side of me has died.

(Break)
Big fights, big aims, big dreams, love letters
You just think you found something better

(V3)
At the beginning it was only anxiety
Now it has clearly become agony
And I can't survive this tragedy
And I also don't understand
If I am the innocent,
Why I got the punishment?

(Chor)
The choice was yours, the pain is mine
The positive side of me has died
(2x)

(Out)
And while you live, you'll watch me die
The positive side, the positive side,
The positive side of me has died

Friday, November 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drugs,farewell,giving up,pain,sickness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 November 2018

An insight into the devastating effects of substance abuse, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A lovely sonorous song. Thanks for sharing Balint.

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