Beneath The Surface Poem by Balint Nagy
Beneath The Surface
I'm so distracted and don't know what to do
My friends have no idea what I'm going through
I know they just preach and pretend
But the truth is, they can't understand
All these walls that we keep building…
All these memories which keep fading…
It's time to admit we've grown bitter-
Friendships turn into something else
They hear my roars as whispers-
So I'm just talking to myself
I wish there was a lonely place
Where I can run away from my mistakes
‘Cause I can no longer carry their weight
This burden is so much more than I can take
All these walls that we keep building…
All these memories which keep fading…
It's time to admit we've grown bitter-
Friendships turn into something else
They hear my roars as whispers-
So I'm just talking to myself
Deep feelings of anxiety insightfully expressed with clarity of thought and mind. A well texted me nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing.
I wish there was a lonely place Where I can run away from my mistakes ‘Cause I can no longer carry their weight This burden is so much more than I can take.... sadness, the weight.. that one feels and experiences.. anxiety and friendship and the desire to be loved and accepted...... thank you dear poet. tony
The message that you have penned here is so well crafted. I love this one, thank you for sharing this Nagy. - EN
A nice poetic imagination, Nagy. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
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4/25/2024 12:30:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
So sad....maybe that's the way of life it is...A beautiful write...a poignant yet loved the emotions being portrayed...thank you, Balint... I rate it 10. Cheryl