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Beneath The Surface

Rating: 4.8
I'm so distracted and don't know what to do
My friends have no idea what I'm going through
I know they just preach and pretend
But the truth is, they can't understand

All these walls that we keep building…
All these memories which keep fading…

It's time to admit we've grown bitter-
Friendships turn into something else
They hear my roars as whispers-
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Friday, August 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,friendship,issues
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 08 September 2019
Deep feelings of anxiety insightfully expressed with clarity of thought and mind. A well texted me nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Henrik Somogyi 15 May 2019
I liked how you painted the mood!
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 January 2018
I wish there was a lonely place Where I can run away from my mistakes ‘Cause I can no longer carry their weight This burden is so much more than I can take.... sadness, the weight.. that one feels and experiences.. anxiety and friendship and the desire to be loved and accepted...... thank you dear poet. tony
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Evelyn Norcott 03 November 2017
The message that you have penned here is so well crafted. I love this one, thank you for sharing this Nagy. - EN
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 August 2017
A nice poetic imagination, Nagy. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
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Cheryl Tutaan 04 August 2017
So sad....maybe that's the way of life it is...A beautiful write...a poignant yet loved the emotions being portrayed...thank you, Balint... I rate it 10. Cheryl
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