(7 Sins)
I am a sinner of sloth
As my paces are needless when i am tucked in your arms.
I am a sinner of gluttony
As your lips are endless waterfalls of pleasure
They can't stop flowing and i can't stop drinking
I am a sinner of vanity
As i am the victor whose crown is your heart, whose realm is your eyes and whose flag is your love.
I am a sinner of lust
When your tempting fire sparkles in my eyes then burns my bones to aches in the name of your allure.
I am a sinner of wrath
When you recklessly desert me on the distant shore from your mind and let my demons crawl to mine.
I am a sinner of greed
When i restlessly strive for your solicitude and mission my lovelorn ghosts to fetch your time in my sacks.
I am a sinner of envy
When your sun shines on their dreadful land while i am trembling in darkness behind my crumbling walls
Darling
I am a sinner of you
A wonderful love poem, comparing the desires and emotions to deadly sins. Well done. Peace
I like this I have also wrote a poem of the 7 sins...this was enjoyable
This poem is of immense beauty. Seven sins are the source of eternal pleasure. I would like to quote: I am a sinner of gluttony As your lips are endless waterfalls of pleasure
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Enjoyed this very interesting love poem, your imagery was excellent in the way you compared man's desires and emotions to deadly sins. In the end stating: Darling, I am a sinner of you. An excellent poem, Ahmed! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn