7 Sins Comments

Enjoyed this very interesting love poem, your imagery was excellent in the way you compared man's desires and emotions to deadly sins. In the end stating: Darling, I am a sinner of you. An excellent poem, Ahmed! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A wonderful love poem, comparing the desires and emotions to deadly sins. Well done. Peace

I like this I have also wrote a poem of the 7 sins...this was enjoyable

This poem is of immense beauty. Seven sins are the source of eternal pleasure. I would like to quote: I am a sinner of gluttony As your lips are endless waterfalls of pleasure