983 Snowflake Poem by V F

983 Snowflake

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drifiting down slowly like a snowflake

beautiful and unique

such a long lonely journey

towards oblivion

try as I might,

destiny cannot change

falling to be swallowed up by the ground below

so what I can and must enjoy is the journey

for what is past is lost

what has to come Will...

(08th april 2002)

Wednesday, January 23, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: april,destiny,journey,lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 23 January 2008

Virginia even with the sadness implied, this is a very beautifully written poem. During such winter moments it may be hard to remember, but the same snowflake will in the spring provide the moisture that sparks the crocus.

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Ying Escalona 23 January 2008

love comes like to avalance..in winter days...

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