Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Bad Or Good - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

What is bad or good?
it is like taste in food
you can never distinguish
it has close finish

It may be over done
it might not have been visualized by any one
what is bad can be good in individual's eye?
we must understand and sincerely try

Good advice may be felt very bad
it may take away peace and make us sad
there is difference between bad or good act
we may be sometimes unreasonable to react

There is right perception to over look
Good food can be spoiled by an expert cook
One bad act may shake your belief
It may give you jolt and doesn't provide relief

Charity begins at home
Good gesture is always welcome
there is definite lacuna somewhere
it is nice always to take care

Love to do the things self and enjoy
The child is always happy with the toy
Bitter words offer discomforts and annoy
Good friends never act as decoy

It is herculean task to evaluate
There nothing to offer or relate
you can speak clearly and state
it should be offered in time and not very late


Comments about A Bad Or Good by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (9/4/2010 8:39:00 AM)


    what a lovely poem.Iits ideas are deep. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/3/2010 8:59:00 AM)


    very nice piece penpal. its touchy for its real tyaste and changeable in the same time.
    i like it for its changing attire.
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  • (8/30/2010 8:39:00 PM)


    Great write, you have a way with words and I love how your express the subject. Thank you so much for sharing. I will definately read more of your works. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2010 7:13:00 PM)


    This is great! I love it :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 27, 2010



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