Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 494,842 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Bad Feeling - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You may be feeling very bad
The heart may be filled and feeling very sad
It has something to do with on going play
We are bound to face something to stay

What can be joy if there are no challenges?
You come out of it and successfully manage?
It is all about success down fall or success story
We sometimes go down with anxiety and worry

Both sides are necessary and are relevant
They may invite adverse and favorable comment
We may cry and at the same time laugh it out
The life is full of extremes and can termed as all about

I wish to cry
But then ask why?
Why I run away and feel shy?
W must stick on, face and try

You love to stay in fray
It may not push you away
It has heavy substance to pull you near
It may frighten but remove your fear


Comments about A Bad Feeling by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/22/2010 5:37:00 AM)


    We may cry and at the same time laugh it out
    The life is full of extremes and can termed as all about

    After a long journey on the surface, a poetic personality acquire such enlightment to share with others. Thank you. Write more....live long....

    Regards,
    pranab
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  • Sherif Monem (8/21/2010 1:23:00 PM)


    Rymes masterfully and flows nicely., (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/17/2010 11:19:00 AM)


    After all i dont think this poem really suit with the title of A bad feeling, yes it about a bad feeling but the content make me feel very good feeling and motivated...Dear friend that is very nice poem, keep writing a poem that lift our hope...a basic thing but very crucial to taste a real meaning of life...i really like when u said no fun if no challenge... :) like it...very true and motivating! (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/12/2010 7:18:00 AM)


    A good advice.Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 9, 2010



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