Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 50,033 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

A Beautiful Cosmic Dance! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Like the dancing configuration of electrons in microscopic atoms
Spinning galaxies of Space are dancing in the macroscopic Universe!

Stars of multiple galaxies are the couples dancing different dances;
Ball dance or ballet dance a couple of inverted triangles of stars do;
Ball or ballet dance couples of stars sparkle in red and white and blue!

All the night as in romantic dream in the vast dark Universe wonderful
Stars like the colourful garden of flowers amuse men and women in life!
Balance of the vast universe goes on by cosmic dance wonderful forever.

The merry go round or the giant wheel in the exhibition too remind that
From the childhood at first and then to ball dance of couples in clubs so
To relax and forget worries of life to rejuvenate spirit and enjoy life ever!

The cosmic dance of the Universe if stops for a moment what will happen?
Will the suspended animation of stars and planets remain where they are?
Or if men and women have not found out dance will there be any relief ever?


Comments about A Beautiful Cosmic Dance! by Ramesh T A

  • (7/18/2010 3:36:00 AM)


    How awesome! What a beautifully penned poem. Loved the dance of this poem! ; D (Report) Reply

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  • (3/3/2010 7:36:00 AM)


    Cosmic Dance …dance Babe … dance Guy …
    Satire finish, ‘Or if men and women have not found out dance will there be any relief ever? ‘
    10+ [dancing galore for]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Indira Renganathan (1/31/2010 3:13:00 AM)


    A BEAUTIFUL COSMIC DANCE....beautiful write...thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 28, 2010


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